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Writing Characters with Glasses.md

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 - _Far-sighted_ – not being able to see stuff up close
 - _Presbyopia_ – easier in German: Altersweitsichtigkeit = elderly far-sightedness, not being able to read small print when you’re older, sometimes end up being far- and near-sighted at the same time
 - _Astigmatism_ – light is not focused evenly on the retina, results in distorted and blurry vision
-- it’s also pretty normal to have different prescriptions for both eyes, one being stronger/weaker than the other one
+- It’s also pretty normal to have different prescriptions for both eyes, one being stronger/weaker than the other one
 
  **Different types of visual aids**
 
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  **How to write it?**
 
-- think about what kind of visual impairment does your character have?
+- Think about what kind of visual impairment does your character have?
-- what are they able to see?
+- What are they able to see?
-- can they see basically everything, but cannot read correctly?
+- Can they see basically everything, but cannot read correctly?
-- can they see enough to get by, but cannot read and drive and get headaches without their glasses?
+- Can they see enough to get by, but cannot read and drive and get headaches without their glasses?
-- can they only see blurred images and colours?
+- Can they only see blurred images and colours?
-- do not change it halfway through the story! Choose their impairment and then _stick with it_.
+- Do not change it halfway through the story! Choose their impairment and then _stick with it_.
-- what are situations where the glasses could hinder them?
+- What are situations where the glasses could hinder them?
-- are they doing a lot of sport, are they getting into fights, situations where they don’t want to wear them for aesthetic reasons?
+- Are they doing a lot of sport, are they getting into fights, situations where they don’t want to wear them for aesthetic reasons?
-- can they not do something because of their impairment? (joining security forces, driving big trucks, etc.)
+- Can they not do something because of their impairment? (joining security forces, driving big trucks, etc.)
-- are they annoyed that they have to wear them? Are they only wearing contact lenses or are they just avoiding wearing anything even though they can’t see everything?
+- Are they annoyed that they have to wear them? Are they only wearing contact lenses or are they just avoiding wearing anything even though they can’t see everything?
-- you don’t have to make a big deal out of your character wearing glasses, but it does play a big part in your character’s life
+- You don’t have to make a big deal out of your character wearing glasses, but it does play a big part in your character’s life
-- remember to put in a few references about it here and there throughout the story
+- Remember to put in a few references about it here and there throughout the story
 
 **things to consider**
 
 _glasses fog up_
 
-- through temperature changes
+- Through temperature changes
-- while going outside or coming in
+- While going outside or coming in
-- while sweating
+- While sweating
 
 _glasses need to be adjusted_
 
-- they will never stay where they are supposed to be
+- They will never stay where they are supposed to be
-- especially when moving around and keeping your head down
+- Especially when moving around and keeping your head down
-- the character will need to adjust them from time to time and push them up again
+- The character will need to adjust them from time to time and push them up again
 
 _glasses need to be cleaned a lot_
 
-- everything will make them dirty
+- Everything will make them dirty
-- best option are specific cleaners
+- Best option are specific cleaners
-- if you don’t have them handy a shirt will have to do, but it needs to be the _right_ material, synthetic stuff is not working
+- If you don’t have them handy a shirt will have to do, but it needs to be the _right_ material, synthetic stuff is not working
-- people with glasses _will_ ask their friends for their shirts if they have to
+- People with glasses _will_ ask their friends for their shirts if they have to
 
 _sunglasses, swim goggles and 3D glasses are impractical_
 
 - 3D glasses need to be over the glasses and it can be tricky to get it right
-- sunglasses need the right prescription and then you would have to change glasses every time you enter a building
+- Sunglasses need the right prescription and then you would have to change glasses every time you enter a building
-- there are clips that go over the normal glasses, but they have to be exact to look fine
+- There are clips that go over the normal glasses, but they have to be exact to look fine
-- swim goggles can also be with prescription, but you would also have to get your glasses as soon as you’re out of the water to take the goggles off and still see enough
+- Swim goggles can also be with prescription, but you would also have to get your glasses as soon as you’re out of the water to take the goggles off and still see enough
-- there are also special glasses for other sports (it’s not great to do sports with real glasses, because if they break it can severely damage your eyes)
+- There are also special glasses for other sports (it’s not great to do sports with real glasses, because if they break it can severely damage your eyes)
 
 _times where you have to take the glasses off_
 
-- when showering
+- When showering
-- when going to bed
+- When going to bed
-- when putting on shirts with a tight neckline
+- When putting on shirts with a tight neckline
 
 _glasses are expensive_
 
-- some insurances pay for them, a lot don’t
+- Some insurances pay for them, a lot don’t
-- the worse the eyesight the more expensive they get
+- The worse the eyesight the more expensive they get
-- glasses and frames are two different things and get sold separately (you can have really expensive glasses in a cheap frame or vice versa)
+- Glasses and frames are two different things and get sold separately (you can have really expensive glasses in a cheap frame or vice versa)
-- you also need a spare pair of glasses, if you lose yours or they get damaged (often this is just an old pair, where the prescription is no longer strong enough)
+- You also need a spare pair of glasses, if you lose yours or they get damaged (often this is just an old pair, where the prescription is no longer strong enough)
 
 **more things to consider**
 
-- a new partner cannot just take the glasses and throw them to the side, when the fun starts, if it leaves the character without being able to see properly, there needs to be some more trust there
+- A new partner cannot just take the glasses and throw them to the side, when the fun starts, if it leaves the character without being able to see properly, there needs to be some more trust there
-- people will take the glasses and put them on, yelling ‘OMG you’re really blind!’ and then ask you how they look like, especially funny when you really can’t see them
+- People will take the glasses and put them on, yelling ‘OMG you’re really blind!’ and then ask you how they look like, especially funny when you really can’t see them
-- people asking ‘how many fingers can you see?’
+- People asking ‘how many fingers can you see?’
-- light hits differently, which means you see light differently and also, it’s hard to take good pictures with glasses
+- Light hits differently, which means you see light differently and also, it’s hard to take good pictures with glasses
-- rain is a nightmare, it’s like driving through rain without a windshield wiper
+- Rain is a nightmare, it’s like driving through rain without a windshield wiper
-- having to be careful on roller coasters and other stuff, because they can and will fly off
+- Having to be careful on roller coasters and other stuff, because they can and will fly off
-- especially with astigmatism it’s hard to drive at night
+- Especially with astigmatism it’s hard to drive at night
-- going to the hair dresser can be annoying when they take your glasses off and then ask you if that’s the right length to cut it and you can’t see it
+- Going to the hair dresser can be annoying when they take your glasses off and then ask you if that’s the right length to cut it and you can’t see it
-- you cannot lie in bed (except on the back) without the glasses pressing uncomfortable in your face
+- You cannot lie in bed (except on the back) without the glasses pressing uncomfortable in your face
-- mascara definitely will end up on the glasses and getting that cleaned is a nightmare
+- Mascara definitely will end up on the glasses and getting that cleaned is a nightmare
-- wearing hats, beanies, giant headphones and even facemasks can be extra annoying, because the arms of the frame will get in the way
+- Wearing hats, beanies, giant headphones and even facemasks can be extra annoying, because the arms of the frame will get in the way
-- you can get headaches from not wearing your glasses, from the pressure of the frame of the glasses and from wearing new and therefore glasses with a stronger prescription
+- You can get headaches from not wearing your glasses, from the pressure of the frame of the glasses and from wearing new and therefore glasses with a stronger prescription
-- small children love glasses, as soon as they can grab stuff, they will yank them off your face if you let them get close enough
+- Small children love glasses, as soon as they can grab stuff, they will yank them off your face if you let them get close enough
-- kids will tease you about them, but after middle school it’s not really a thing anymore (mostly and as adults it’s really nothing special)
+- Kids will tease you about them, but after middle school it’s not really a thing anymore (mostly and as adults it’s really nothing special)
-- glasses have blind spots on the sides and top and bottom, so you sometimes have to move your head more
+- Glasses have blind spots on the sides and top and bottom, so you sometimes have to move your head more
 
 **Tropes**
 
 _Blind without glasses and dropped glasses_
 
 - I actually only have sharp vision for a distance of 10 cm, which means I would not get home save if I had to cross a street to get to my building without glasses
-- but I very rarely lose my glasses
+- But I very rarely lose my glasses
-- so, the trope of someone not being able to see without them is correct in some cases, but it’s definitely not hilarious and there are not often situations where they are just without glasses and fumbling around
+- So, the trope of someone not being able to see without them is correct in some cases, but it’s definitely not hilarious and there are not often situations where they are just without glasses and fumbling around
 
 _Being smart_
 
-- people wearing glasses can be just as dumb as everyone else
+- People wearing glasses can be just as dumb as everyone else
-- try not to make the only one wearing glasses be the smart kid
+- Try not to make the only one wearing glasses be the smart kid
 
 _The Cure_
 
-- often found in fantasy books, people will somehow get cured from needing glasses
+- Often found in fantasy books, people will somehow get cured from needing glasses
-- getting some superpowers that eradicate their visual impairment and ‘fixing’ them
+- Getting some superpowers that eradicate their visual impairment and ‘fixing’ them
 
 _The Makeover scene_
 
 - I love makeover scenes just like everybody else does
 - _but:_ it’s not really cool to see the ‘ugly duckling’ suddenly becoming a beautiful swan by throwing away their glasses
-- and it’s impractical, if they just put them away and it was established that they can’t really see that well without them it’s just stupid to leave them at home
+- And it’s impractical, if they just put them away and it was established that they can’t really see that well without them it’s just stupid to leave them at home
-- if they get new and cooler glasses, the person giving them to them would have needed to know their exact prescription, glasses are expensive and it takes time before they are ready
+- If they get new and cooler glasses, the person giving them to them would have needed to know their exact prescription, glasses are expensive and it takes time before they are ready
-- if they wear contact lenses from now on, they would also need to know the prescription and if they have never worn contact lenses before it will take some time to get used to putting them in and wearing them
+- If they wear contact lenses from now on, they would also need to know the prescription and if they have never worn contact lenses before it will take some time to get used to putting them in and wearing them
 
 _Finally… please write characters with glasses. This sounds like a lot of hassle, but for most people it’s the most normal thing in the world. Studies show that soon half the world population will need glasses and I still didn’t really have a cool girl with glasses as a role model in literature when I grew up. It’s just another form of representation and I hope I can help you with this post to create some cool characters!_