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"Story Length Estimation.md",
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"Dialogue Tags.md",
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*Source: [I kind of suck at tagging, so I made this infographic to help make it easier. – @mostlyinthemorning on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/mostlyinthemorning/664760484135895040/i-kind-of-suck-at-tagging-so-i-made-this)*
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*Source: [Active vs. Passive Voice: What's the Difference? | Grammarly](https://www.grammarly.com/blog/active-vs-passive-voice/)*
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*Source: [How to Critique: Best Practices for Workshopping | The World Remains Mysterious](https://www.kittywumpus.net/blog/2014/01/31/how-to-critique-best-practices-for-workshopping/)*
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# Questions I Ask My Beta Readers
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*Source: [Questions I Ask My Beta Readers – @burntoutdaydreamer on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/burntoutdaydreamer/736178941698752512/questions-i-ask-my-beta-readers)*
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## Questions I Ask My Beta Readers
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"Did you like it?" just doesn't cut it when you're trying to get useful feedback, so here's some questions that get your reader really thinking about your work:
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*Source: [Cues to Emotion](http://www.joannawaugh.com/cues-to-emotion.html)*
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## Embarrassed
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|
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- Clear throat
|
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- Swallow
|
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- Gulp
|
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- Wet lips with tongue
|
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- Male: bobbling or jumping Adam’s apple
|
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- Flushed skin
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- Hot/tingling skin
|
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- Lack of eye contact
|
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- BreathinessHappy/Humor/Pleasure
|
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- Smile
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- Animated eyes/expression
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- Tears in eyes/crying/sobbing
|
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- Tightening of the throat/inability to speak
|
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- Quivering chin
|
||||
- Dilated pupils
|
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- Eaise/lift eyebrows to widen eyes
|
||||
- Facial flush
|
||||
- Laugh (can be silent)
|
||||
- Hugging upper abdomen/lower chest sigh
|
||||
|
||||
## Humble/Deferential/Non-aggressive/Submissive
|
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|
||||
- Bowed head
|
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- Head tilted to one side
|
||||
- Lowered chin
|
||||
- Down-turned eyes
|
||||
- No direct eye contact
|
||||
- Tight-lipped
|
||||
- Silent
|
||||
- Slumped/hunched shoulders
|
||||
- Shrug shoulders
|
||||
- Turn body inward to make smaller
|
||||
- Open palms
|
||||
- Arms next to side
|
||||
- Pout
|
||||
- Low voice
|
||||
|
||||
## Friendly/Love/Infatuated
|
||||
|
||||
- Close proximity to object of affection (address or aim at, lean toward, intrude into personal space)
|
||||
- Block intrusion by third person by laying arm across back of chair, crossing feet, standing in such a way as to block view of the rest of the room
|
||||
- Man - leaning back with pelvis thrust forward, legs apart, hands hook in pockets with fingers pointing down to genitals = I'm available; I'm sexually dangerous
|
||||
- Women cross arms around men they don’t like and use open arm position around men they do like. Crossed arms for a woman can also signal that she's closed in and wants to be let out.
|
||||
- Head tilted to one side
|
||||
- Head/hair toss
|
||||
- Shoulder shrug
|
||||
- Stand up straighter, more alert
|
||||
- Pull in stomach
|
||||
- Skin blush or pale
|
||||
- Change in body smell
|
||||
- Draw attention to lips (i.e. wet with tongue, pout)
|
||||
- Touch own body
|
||||
- Stroke or push hair away from face
|
||||
- Adjust clothing
|
||||
- Hand on hip to expose wrist and/or palm
|
||||
- Increased heart rate
|
||||
- Hug/snuggle/nuzzle
|
||||
- Nose rub
|
||||
- Playful bite
|
||||
- Tongue touches lip
|
||||
- Kiss
|
||||
- Bat eyelids
|
||||
- Flirting glance
|
||||
- Narrowed eyes
|
||||
- Deliberate eye contact/holding gaze
|
||||
- Eyes roam over other person's face, linger on throat, breasts/chest, body in deliberate signal of interest
|
||||
- Dilated pupils
|
||||
- Caress with fingertips or lips
|
||||
- Tickle
|
||||
- Hold hands
|
||||
- Stroke other person's palm with thumb
|
||||
- Lingering touch
|
||||
- Extend or reach out with arms/hands
|
||||
- Man - place open hand at the small of woman's back while walking = you're mine/I'm in command
|
||||
- Female: sway hips when walking\male: saunter
|
||||
- Thigh contact
|
||||
- Facial flush
|
||||
- Gaze down coyly
|
||||
- Sigh
|
||||
- Smile
|
||||
- Breathiness
|
||||
- Husky voice
|
||||
- Throaty voice
|
||||
- Giggle
|
||||
- Flattering comments
|
||||
|
||||
## Lying/Deceptive
|
||||
|
||||
- Gazing down/lack of eye contact
|
||||
- Sweaty palms/head/neck/armpits
|
||||
- Raising upward on/lifting toes
|
||||
- Scratching/rubbing/pinching/holding parts of body
|
||||
- Dilated pupils
|
||||
- Rapid eye blink
|
||||
- Pretending excitement to convince
|
||||
- Lips pressed together
|
||||
- Darting tongue
|
||||
- Clear throat
|
||||
- False smile
|
||||
- Reticence/withdrawal from contact
|
||||
- Shoulder shrug
|
||||
- Touching forehead/jaw with hand
|
||||
- Facial flushing, especially around eyes
|
||||
- Deliberate control of body energy = fewer movements, stiffness of demeanor
|
||||
- Wheedling tone of voice
|
||||
|
||||
## Sad/Depressed/Grief/Pain
|
||||
|
||||
- Tears standing in eyes/crying/sobbing
|
||||
- Narrowed eyes
|
||||
- Closed eyes
|
||||
- Tightening of the throat
|
||||
- Inability to speak
|
||||
- Repeated swallowing
|
||||
- Quivering chin
|
||||
- Pout
|
||||
- Compressed/down-turned mouth or lips
|
||||
- Chew lip
|
||||
- Flared nostrils
|
||||
- Wrinkled nose/ brow
|
||||
- Forward bowing of body, turning in on oneself
|
||||
- Arms folded across lower chest/upper abdomen
|
||||
- Lethargy
|
||||
- Clenched fist
|
||||
- Stiffness of body
|
||||
- Hand over heart
|
||||
- Slumped posture/drooping shoulders
|
||||
- Gazing downward
|
||||
- Sigh
|
||||
- Wavering voice
|
||||
- Toneless voice
|
||||
|
||||
## Surprise
|
||||
|
||||
- Brows arched upward
|
||||
- Open mouth
|
||||
- Parted lips
|
||||
- Grimace
|
||||
- Wide eyes
|
||||
- Fixated stare
|
||||
- Rapid eye blink
|
||||
- Startle reflex
|
||||
- Sudden intake of breath
|
||||
- Drawing back of body
|
||||
- Head jerked/thrown back
|
||||
- Exclamation
|
||||
|
||||
*Note about crying:* women cry 5X more than men and their tears are more copious. Crying spell lasts only 1-2 minutes. Tears seem to relieve stress so, after a crying jag, there is relief.
|
||||
|
||||
*Note about Eye Movement:* Glance to the right = looking into the future and searching for words. Glance to the left = searching the past to make sure words are correct.
|
||||
|
||||
## Defensive/Aggressive/Angry/Enraged
|
||||
|
||||
- Tense jaw/mouth
|
||||
- Compressed mouth/lips
|
||||
- Biting bottom lip
|
||||
- Sneer
|
||||
- Guttural throat sounds
|
||||
- Loud speech/yell/scream
|
||||
- Jutted chin
|
||||
- Clenched jaw
|
||||
- Frown
|
||||
- Wrinkled nose
|
||||
- Flared nostrils
|
||||
- Widened eyes
|
||||
- Protruding eyeballs
|
||||
- Dilated pupils
|
||||
- Hands on hips/away from body
|
||||
- Body displayed broadside
|
||||
- Squared shoulders
|
||||
- Shrug shoulders
|
||||
- Body held erect/stand tall
|
||||
- Head jerks
|
||||
- Tick in cheek/eye/corner of mouth
|
||||
- Head brought forward
|
||||
- Clenched fists
|
||||
- Drumming/tapping fingers
|
||||
- Palms down, beating gesture/flailing hands/arms
|
||||
- Red face/neck/ears
|
||||
- Hitting something with fists
|
||||
- Stiff walking
|
||||
|
||||
## Anxious/Impatient/Nervous/Tense/Fearful
|
||||
|
||||
- Clear throat
|
||||
- Swallow
|
||||
- Gulp
|
||||
- Jaw drop/open mouth
|
||||
- Dry mouth
|
||||
- Wet lips with tongue/touch lips with finger
|
||||
- Catch in throat
|
||||
- Raspy voice unable to speak
|
||||
- Male – bobbing/jumping Adam’s apple
|
||||
- Perspire (palms/face/neck/armpits) = cold sweat
|
||||
- Pale skin
|
||||
- Lean/angle away from what’s making person anxious
|
||||
- Make oneself smaller to reduce exposure to danger
|
||||
- Tense lips, neck, shoulder muscles
|
||||
- Arms folded across lower chest/upper abdomen
|
||||
- Neutral facial expression = do not approach
|
||||
- No eye contact
|
||||
- Rapid eye blink
|
||||
- Protruding eyeballs
|
||||
- Wide eyes
|
||||
- Tick in cheek/eye/corner of mouth
|
||||
- Dilated pupils
|
||||
- Flared nostrils
|
||||
- Frown
|
||||
- Crying
|
||||
- Increased breathing rate/rapid heartbeat
|
||||
- Tremble, especially lips
|
||||
- Chattering of teeth
|
||||
- Hair bristling
|
||||
- Clenched fists
|
||||
- Drumming/tapping fingers
|
||||
- Palms down, beating gesture/flailing hands/arms
|
||||
- Scratching/rubbing/pinching/holding parts of body
|
||||
|
||||
## Arrogant/Disdainful
|
||||
|
||||
- Rearing back
|
||||
- Mocking bow of head or upper torso
|
||||
- Lift chin
|
||||
- Look down nose
|
||||
- Jut chin
|
||||
- Lift one eyebrow
|
||||
- Tilt head back
|
||||
- Narrowed eyes
|
||||
- Compressed lips/mouth
|
||||
- Lip raised/curled in sneer
|
||||
- Hands on hips
|
||||
- Look down one’s nose
|
||||
- Flared nostrils
|
||||
- Loud voice
|
||||
- Yawn
|
||||
|
||||
## Confident/Brave
|
||||
|
||||
- Square shoulders
|
||||
- Full body display
|
||||
- Stand erect/tall
|
||||
- Hands on hips
|
||||
- Swagger when walking
|
||||
|
||||
## Confused/Puzzled/Uncertain
|
||||
|
||||
- Frown
|
||||
- Slack jaw
|
||||
- Pout
|
||||
- Pursed lips
|
||||
- Wet lips with tongue/touch lips with finger
|
||||
- Tongue clenched between lips
|
||||
- Suck thumb
|
||||
- Mouth turned downward
|
||||
- Clenched jaw
|
||||
- Clear throat
|
||||
- Lowered eyelids
|
||||
- Elbow raised with hand behind head
|
||||
- Scratch head
|
||||
- Tug on ear
|
||||
- Tap cheek with finger
|
||||
- Rub back of neck with one hand
|
||||
- Wrinkled nose
|
||||
- Scratching/rubbing/pinching/holding parts of body
|
||||
- Hug waist with arms
|
||||
- Shrug shoulders
|
||||
- Raspy/thready voice
|
||||
|
||||
## Curious
|
||||
|
||||
- Head cocked to one side
|
||||
- Wrinkled nose/brow
|
||||
- Pursed lips
|
||||
- Raised brow
|
||||
- Wide eyes
|
||||
- Finger touch to cheek/jaw
|
||||
|
||||
## Defeated
|
||||
|
||||
- Slumped/hunched shoulders
|
||||
- Vacant expression
|
||||
- Toneless voice
|
||||
|
||||
## Disagree/Disgusted/Abhorrent/Revulsion
|
||||
|
||||
- Distance from object
|
||||
- Turn or face away/shift body away
|
||||
- Turning one’s back
|
||||
- Lean back
|
||||
- Fold arms across upper chest/lower abdomen
|
||||
- Cut off hand gesture
|
||||
- Sneer
|
||||
- Roll eyes
|
||||
- Narrowed eyes
|
||||
- No eye contact
|
||||
- Frown
|
||||
- Wrinkled nose
|
||||
- Flared nostrils
|
||||
- Backward head jerks
|
||||
- Head shake
|
||||
- Protrusion of tongue
|
||||
- Guttural throat sounds
|
||||
- Pursed lips
|
||||
- Thin lips
|
||||
- Tongue pressed between lips
|
||||
- Clenched jaw
|
||||
|
||||
## Disbelief/Skeptical/Suspicious
|
||||
|
||||
- Arch eyebrow
|
||||
- Narrowed eyes
|
||||
- Compressed lips/Down-turned mouth
|
||||
- Head shake
|
||||
- Clenched jaw
|
||||
- Shoulder shrug
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [How To Describe Beer Taste — Love Beer Learning](https://lovebeerlearning.co.uk/lovebeerlearningblog/how-to-describe-beer-taste)*
|
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|
|||
*Source: [Dialogue Tags: 12 Categories and 102 Examples for Writers](https://storygrid.com/dialogue-tags/)*
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [Emotion-Feeling-Wheel-1-1.jpg (JPEG Image, 2318 × 2372 pixels)](https://www.davidhodder.com/*wp-content/uploads/2018/10/Emotion-Feeling-Wheel-1-1.jpg)*
|
||||
## :LiAngry: Anger
|
||||
| Rage | Exasperated | Irritable | Envy | Disgust |
|
||||
| ------- | ----------- | ---------- | --------- | -------- |
|
||||
| Hostile | Frustrated | Aggravated | Resentful | Contempt |
|
||||
| Hate | Agitated | Annoyed | Jealous | Revolted |
|
||||
## :LiFrown: Sadness
|
||||
| Suffering | Sadness | Disappointed | Shameful | Neglected | Despair |
|
||||
| --------- | --------- | ------------ | --------- | --------- | --------- |
|
||||
| Agony | Depressed | Dismayed | Regretful | Isolated | Grief |
|
||||
| Hurt | Sorrow | Displeased | Guilty | Lonely | Powerless |
|
||||
## :LiPartyPopper: Surprise
|
||||
| Stunned | Confused | Amazed | Overcome | Moved |
|
||||
| -------- | ------------- | ---------- | ---------- | ---------- |
|
||||
| Shocked | Disillusioned | Astonished | Speechless | Stimulated |
|
||||
| Dismayed | Perplexed | Awe-struck | Astounded | Touched |
|
||||
## :LiSmile: Joy
|
||||
| Content | Happy | Cheerful | Proud | Optimistic | Enthusiastic | Elation | Enthralled |
|
||||
| --------- | --------- | -------- | ----------- | ---------- | ------------ | ---------- | ---------- |
|
||||
| Pleased | Amused | Jovial | Triumphant | Hopeful | Zeal | Jubilation | Rapture |
|
||||
| Satisfied | Delighted | Blissful | Illustrious | Eager | Excited | Euphoric | Enchanted |
|
||||
## :LiHeart: Love
|
||||
| Peaceful | Tenderness | Desire | Longing | Affectionate |
|
||||
| --------- | ------------- | ----------- | ----------- | ------------ |
|
||||
| Satisfied | Compassionate | Infatuation | Attracted | Fondness |
|
||||
| Relieved | Caring | Passion | Sentimental | Romantic |
|
||||
## :LiSkull: Fear
|
||||
| Horror | Nervous | Insecure | Terror | Scared |
|
||||
| --------- | ------- | ---------- | ---------- | ---------- |
|
||||
| Dread | Anxious | Inadequate | Hysterical | Helpless |
|
||||
| Mortified | Worried | Inferior | Panic | Frightened |
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [How to Write Fanfic Summaries – @wolfstarlibrarian on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/wolfstarlibrarian/629281741962723328/how-to-write-fanfic-summaries)*
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [Genres of Writing: Definition, Examples, and 12 Types](https://storygrid.com/genres-of-writing/)*
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [How to Describe Fear in Writing - Brilliantio](https://brilliantio.com/how-to-describe-fear-in-writing/)*
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [How to use a semicolon - The Oatmeal](https://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon)*
|
|
@ -0,0 +1 @@
|
|||
*Source: [Literary Devices - Literary Terms, Techniques, and Elements](https://literarydevices.com/)*
|
|
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|
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*Source: [i love your takeaway from the JJ Abrams Mystery Box was "it's because what's in the mystery box is developed/good/exists. you... – @jacky-rubou on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/jacky-rubou/737548333898399744/i-love-your-takeaway-from-the-jj-abrams-mystery)*
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*Source: [When to Use Semicolons, Colons, and Dashes | Grammarly Blog](https://www.grammarly.com/blog/semicolon-vs-colon-vs-dash/)*
|
|
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|
|||
*Source: [So I was thinking about epithets yesterday and how when they're used well they really add to the work and when they're used... – @scarlettohairdye on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/scarlettohairdye/696944010763403264/so-i-was-thinking-about-epithets-yesterday-and-how)*
|
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![[Pasted image 20240608031142.png]]
|
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*Source: [Infographic to estimate how long a story will be. | Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/posts/12561943)*
|
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|
|||
*Source: [Story Structure Comparison | Author Michael Roth](https://www.rothwrites.com/story-structure-comparison)*
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*Source: [Cheat Sheets For Writing Body Language - Writers Write](https://www.writerswrite.co.za/cheat-sheets-for-writing-body-language/)*
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| Anticipation | |
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| Awe | |
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| Amusement | |
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| Anger or Aggression | |
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| Annoyance | |
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| Anxiety | |
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| Attentiveness | |
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| Boredom | |
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| Confidence | |
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| Confusion | |
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| Contempt | |
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| Cynical | |
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| Deception | |
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| Defensive | |
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| Desire | |
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| Disbelief | |
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| Disgust | |
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| Displeasure | |
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| Distress | |
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| Embarassment | |
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| Fatigue | |
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| Grief | |
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| Happiness | |
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| Honesty | |
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| Impatience | |
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| Jealousy | |
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| Overwhelmed | |
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| Passion or Eagerness | |
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| Playfulness | |
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| Pleasure | |
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| Possessiveness | |
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| Pride or Dominance | |
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| Reluctance | |
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| Sadness | |
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| Secretiveness | |
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| Shame | |
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| Shock | |
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| Shyness | |
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| Smugness | |
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| Suspicion | |
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| Thoughtfulness | |
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*Source: [How to write a character with glasses – @creativepromptsforwriting on Tumblr](https://www.tumblr.com/creativepromptsforwriting/643734910397448192/how-to-write-a-character-with-glasses)*
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