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                     <h2><cite>KotOR</cite> Articles I Recommend</h2>
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-                        <li><a href="https://somblog.tumblr.com/post/175466502069/this-isnt-a-star-wars-fandom-blog-but-ive-been" target="_blank">This essay about Juhani</a> by Tumblr user somblog is an amazing analysis of Juhani's character.</li>
-                        <li><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/kotor/comments/129co74/in_defense_of_peragus_its_not_just_welldesigned/" target="_blank">In Defense of Peragus: it’s not just well-designed, it’s a uniquely good level too</a> by Snigaroo on the KotOR Subreddit</li>
+                        <li><a href="https://somblog.tumblr.com/post/175466502069/this-isnt-a-star-wars-fandom-blog-but-ive-been" target="_blank">This essay about Juhani</a> by Tumblr user somblog is an excellent analysis of Juhani's character.</li>
+                        <li><a href="https://www.reddit.com/r/kotor/comments/129co74/in_defense_of_peragus_its_not_just_welldesigned/" target="_blank">In Defense of Peragus: it’s not just well-designed, it’s a uniquely good level too</a> by Snigaroo on the KotOR Subreddit — An excellent essay that goes into detail in explaining why some of us actually find Peragus a good level. I am among the minority that genuinely enjoy Peragus, to the extent that I never even considered using any mod to skip the level, and I replay all the hologram recordings throughout Peragus and the Harbinger every time I replay <cite>KotOR 2</cite>.</li>
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