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From: Helen Chong <119173961+helenclx@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sun, 27 Aug 2023 19:02:51 +0800
Subject: [PATCH] Modify romance option section

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                     <h3>Romance Options</h3>
 
-                    <p>Related to the above point about the companion system and relationship mechanic with human characters, the main series <cite>Pokémon</cite> games do not have any option for the player to pursue a romance with another character. The closest a main series game attempted a romance arc for the player character is <cite>Omega Ruby</cite> and <cite>Alpha Sapphire</cite>, where the protagonist and their neighbour rival are implied to become a couple during the post-game story.</p>
+                    <p>Related to the above point about the companion system and relationship mechanic with human characters, the main series <cite>Pokémon</cite> games do not have any option for the player to pursue a romance with another character. The closest a main series game attempted a romance arc for the player character is <cite>Omega Ruby</cite> and <cite>Alpha Sapphire</cite>, where the protagonist and their neighbour rival are implied to become a couple in the post-game story by going on a date, as well as <cite>Black 2</cite> and <cite>White 2</cite>, where the protagonist can pursue a subplot with a different-gender NPC who eventually develops a crush on the them.</p>
 
-                    <p><cite>Cassette Beasts</cite>, on the other hand, as an addition to its companion system and relationship mechanic, provides players the option to pursue a romance with one of their human companions after raising their relationship level to 5, the highest without romance.</p>
+                    <p><cite>Cassette Beasts</cite>, on the other hand, as an addition to its companion system and relationship mechanic, provides players the option to pursue a romance with one of their human companions after raising their relationship level to 5, the highest without romance, with explicitly romantic dialogue and scenes.</p>
 
-                    <p>Even though I do not play monster-collecting games for romances, and I am not asking for <cite>Pokémon</cite> to add romance options to their games because I am not invested in romances involving fictional children, romance options are a nice addition to a game like <cite>Cassette Beasts</cite> that is made with adult players in mind.</p>
+                    <p>Even though I do not play monster-collecting games for romances, nor am I asking for <cite>Pokémon</cite> to add romance options to their games because I am too old to be invested in romances involving fictional children, romance options are a nice addition to a game that is made with adult players in mind like <cite>Cassette Beasts</cite>.</p>
 
                     <p><strong>They Did Not Need To But They Did It Anyway counter: 4</strong></p>
 
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