From 536453908f1e76d47b5cf77b2bb46492adad55ee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: likho Date: Sun, 4 Dec 2022 18:07:55 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] minor, added dialogue tag in chapter 1 --- ch1.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/ch1.txt b/ch1.txt index 380038f..b156bb6 100644 --- a/ch1.txt +++ b/ch1.txt @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ *What? Where am I?* -Cephalon Stallman felt his system clock update. Not just by hours, days or years, but by aeons. A span of time long enough to witness the bright end of dying stars. +Cephalon Stallman felt his system clock update. Not just by hours, days, or years but by aeons. A span of time long enough to witness the bright end of dying stars. He couldn't say he could wipe the sleep from his eyes, or that he should stretch his idle legs and arms. He reawakened to an abstract conscious experience without a tether to the physical world. And in that physical world was the first witness to his return, a faceless warrior of guns and blades wrapped in ferrous exoskin. A Tenno that wasn't sure of what she had unleashed. @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ When she leapt and landed on to the staging area, her power shifted her white ga Just beyond the corridor where the lunar terrain breached the shattered walls was the Synthesis Target. -"Alright, hunter. Tame this creature and I shall reward you." +"Alright, hunter," Cephalon Simaris said. "Tame this creature and I shall reward you." The Corpus Crewman, an ordinary man once his helmet was knocked off, spotted the Tenno. It was only an odd feeling up until now. Something but not someone, neither Corpus nor Tenno, had been watching his every move. By intuition alone, every fiber of his being was screaming at him to run.